In order to solve traffic problems government should tax private cars owners heavily and use the money to improve public transport. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Nowadays more
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Nowadays, more
and more people across the country driving their own
car
which may cause traffic congestion. It is argued that imposing
heavy
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heavy taxes
a heavy tax
tax
on people who own
car
is the solution to overcome
this
issue and bring improvement in
public transportation system
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the public transportation system
.
This
essay will discuss its benefits and drawbacks.
To begin
with,
first
of all
implementation
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implementations
of heavy
tax
can
resultant
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result
resulting
in improving public transport. While collecting
tax
from
car
owner these
money
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monies
moneys
can be
use
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used
on different public infrastructure that make out transport system more convenient
such
as buses, trains and planes. In
this
way most of the people will choose government services for their destination rather than private serviced
such
as
taxi
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taxis
a taxi
.
Moreover
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Moreover, tax
tax
will help government to construct new roads.
In addition
the number of cars will be
fallen
mat together and make felt-like
felt
as a
result there
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result, there
are fewer chances for environmental pollution and traffic noises.
Secondly
, if we look through negative aspects so there are rare chances for each citizen to have his
own so
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own, so
that
car
companies
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companies'
company's
business may fall down
consequently
may cause unemployment. According to
report
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a report
reports
in 2001 Japan government doubled implementing
tax
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a tax
on
car
manufactures industries
as a result
70 out of 400 industries remained close.
Moreover
, it is not easy for every citizen to access public transport.
For
instance many
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instance, many
farmers who live in
village need
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the village need
to travel some hours in order to reach
public bus
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the public bus
or railway station. In conclusion, even though
high
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higher
tax
can help to improve transportation system
such
as roads and buses despite there are several other disadvantages
such
as increasing in unemployment ratio.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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