Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Consumption of
internet
Suggestion
the internet
, especially, need of social media has increased exponentially for
last
few years. I intend that social media has brought benefits in our lives rather than disadvantages, if we
use
it properly. There are over 1 billion Facebook accounts which used
regular
Suggestion
regularly
.
From
Suggestion
For
kindergarten kids to pension elders
use
it too. Social media is used for communication and entertainment. It allows us to contact anyone who is on the other side of the earth without any charge.
Moreover
, it gives us opportunity to get latest information and keep up with the world trend.
Also
, if you have
desire
Suggestion
a desire
the desire
to share anything unique you can do with others,
it
it is
it's
the best way to introduce yourself.
However
, social media has
dark side
Suggestion
a dark side
too. The most crucial thing is personal information confidentiality. When using social media, you must know what you are doing. Clicking on one button, you are
in
Suggestion
at
risk to share your very private information. Usually, elders or kids, who is not familiar
to
Suggestion
with
modern technology has to be careful. Leaving their account open in public internet
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
, possibility to occur fraud might increase. In Mongolia, there is warning inducted from
Police
Suggestion
the Police
that
says
express in words
tells
people to not leave open their account in any place and tell anyone their password or not to access risky links which derived from unknown source. Despite the fact that too many risks it is followed with, people still
use
social media. It became essential part of their life. I believe that, as long as people
follows
Suggestion
follow
security steps and be aware of losing confidentiality of their accounts, it is safe to
use
it and keep on receiving
advantages
Suggestion
the advantages
of social media.

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