Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.

Nowadays, it is a common trend to have a

pet

home

. But a group of people believes that kids like them while the

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

think that they can be dangerous and can be the cause of many health related issues. I personally consider that having an animal at

home

can be the reason of many diseases. In

this

essay, both sides of the topic will be discussed with illustrations. Domestic animals can harm the children at

home

because we cannot predict the mood of an animal. For an example, people normally have

dog

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a dog

or a cat a

pet

and leave their kids with them in a room and according to the research under title “Animal Behaviour”

conduct

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conducted

by the National University, Australia (NUA) 25 percent of recorded

attack

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attacks

on the kids were done by pets while they were alone with them.

Furthermore

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

research published by the same department of NUA described that animals have germs on their hairs and tongue, those cannot be removed from their body because those germs are produced by their body.

However

, people have

pet

to protect themselves from thieves. Specially, in Europe and America single mothers mostly have one or more dogs at their places to protect their family and

home

from any intrusion.

Moreover

, some dogs are specially trained to help the aged and blind people to move from one place to another place.

On the other hand

, 50% of

aged

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aging

people get injured while they were walking at

home

and collide with a sleeping

pet

on the floor. So, keeping an animal at

home

has its own pros and cons. In conclusion, taking an animal

inside

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inside a home can

home

can be dangerous

for

Suggestion

your family’s health and specially, for kids. If you want to keep a

pet

for safety, it is suggested to have a

pet

house out of your

home

or at least outside of your bedroom.

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