Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.

Nowadays, it is a common trend to have a
pet
at
home
. But a group of people believes that kids like them while the
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
think that they can be dangerous and can be the cause of many health related issues. I personally consider that having an animal at
home
can be the reason of many diseases. In
this
essay, both sides of the topic will be discussed with illustrations. Domestic animals can harm the children at
home
because we cannot predict the mood of an animal. For an example, people normally have
dog
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a dog
or a cat a
pet
and leave their kids with them in a room and according to the research under title “Animal Behaviour”
conduct
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conducted
by the National University, Australia (NUA) 25 percent of recorded
attack
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attacks
on the kids were done by pets while they were alone with them.
Furthermore
,
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
research published by the same department of NUA described that animals have germs on their hairs and tongue, those cannot be removed from their body because those germs are produced by their body.
However
, people have
pet
to protect themselves from thieves. Specially, in Europe and America single mothers mostly have one or more dogs at their places to protect their family and
home
from any intrusion.
Moreover
, some dogs are specially trained to help the aged and blind people to move from one place to another place.
On the other hand
, 50% of
aged
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aging
people get injured while they were walking at
home
and collide with a sleeping
pet
on the floor. So, keeping an animal at
home
has its own pros and cons. In conclusion, taking an animal
inside
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inside a home can
home
can be dangerous
for
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to
your family’s health and specially, for kids. If you want to keep a
pet
for safety, it is suggested to have a
pet
house out of your
home
or at least outside of your bedroom.
Submitted by bahria.phd on

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