The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the proportional of instructors in
United Kingdom
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the United Kingdom
of Nursery, primary
school
, college, Private institute and universities in 2010. Overall, the percentage of women teacher in nursery, primary
school
and secondary
school
were higher than
men whereas
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men, whereas
men percentage recorded maximum in private training institute and university.
Furthermore
, the most significant
different
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difference
was in Nursery and Primary
school
between man and women.
To begin
with,
first
of all the rate of men tutor
in
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at
nursery primary
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nursery, primary
school
and were under 10
% while
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%, while
the rate of female teacher were almost 95% and 90% respectively. In secondary
school we
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school, we
noticed that the men instructors suddenly increased to around 44% than those of female
teacher
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teachers
who measured
as
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at
48%.
Secondly in
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Secondly, in
private training institute the number of teachers of male recorded higher which measured
as
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at
48
% while
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%, while
female tutor percentage end up with 44%
that is
completely opposite to secondary
school
. Surprisingly, there is no difference found in
college so
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college, so
both ended at almost 45%.
Finally in
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Finally, in
university the majority teachers were male who measured 70%
that is
opposed to women at 30%.

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