Governments give lots of supports to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Investing lots of
money
on arts and
artist
Suggestion
the artist
artists
has become a trend. In certain demographics, they believe
this
is a waste of
money
, others,
however
, argue that
money
should be spent on the development of
arts
Suggestion
the arts
and support to
artist
Suggestion
the artist
should be given.
This
essay will discuss why
money
should be spent on
artist but
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artist, but
why it is more important to invest more in other areas,
such
as science and
health
. Nowadays,
number
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a number
of artists out there in the society has enormously increased. They are working on different areas to promote their works.
This
is considered as a good trend as it helps to promote country's cultural and traditional values to the world.
For example
, Sri Lankan government has started a
film
studio a few years back and after that, one of the
film
directors was able to get nominated
for Oscar for his
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for an Oscar for his
film
about ancient Sri Lankan tradition.
This
gave
good sign
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a good sign
about the
film
industry as well as it was able to
made
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make
a good impact on
tourism industry
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the tourism industry
. Due to
this
, governments should encourage
artist
by investing more
money
. Even though, it has an impact on
country's economy
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the country's economy
a country's economy
and recognition, it seems like squandering
money
on unwanted stuff. There are
number
Suggestion
a number
of significant
health
issues still persist throughout the world.
Therefore
, governments should focus on resolving those issues rather than spending
money
on arts and artists.
For instance
, Cancer has increasingly become a burning issue in every part of the world. In order to solve
this
, governments should invest more
money
on researches to find a solution for
this
. It is more important to spend
money
on these sectors than investing them on
artist
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the artist
.
Money
should be spent on more towards finding solutions to current issues.
This
essay discussed why
money
should
spent
Suggestion
spend
on betterment of
artist
and
art but
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art, but
why governments must more focus on spending
money
in other areas
such
as science and
health
. In my opinion, I believe investing
money
in science and
health
is the best thing a government can do.

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