Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

How much more can the
price
of
petrol
be increased? It has been argued that in order to reduce the increasing traffic and
irrversible
incapable of being reversed
irreversible
dames to Earth that we are causing with
pollution
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the pollution
it is necessary to
rise
raise the level or amount of something
raise
the
price
of
petrol
. In my opinion
,
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,
there are other ways that can be intelligently implemented to reduce traffic
pollution
.
To begin
with, increasing the
price
of
petrol
is not the best solution due to the fact that there are some countries where the prices of
petrol
are so high that
unfortunatelly
by bad luck
unfortunately
people have complained and nothing has been done
therefore
, they still use their cars.
In addition
, people in those countries have two or three
cars so, it
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cars, so it
would be useless to increase the
price
. On the other
hadn
the (prehensile) extremity of the superior limb
hand
had
, the
first
step to be taken would be to demand government investments in bicycle lanes and an intelligent software that enables to sync one person's mobile with their bike so as to know how many kilometres they have ridden and in
this
way the amount of tax that would be reduced it would be proportional to the kilometres and so on.
As a result
, a large number of people would be encouraged to use
bicylcles
a wheeled vehicle that has two wheels and is moved by foot pedals
bicycles
instead
of cars and
consequently
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consequent
pollution
would reduce before it is too late. The obvious conclusion to be drawn is that governments
shoul
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
investe
make an investment
invest
invested
invests
in
wasy
structure consisting of a sloping way down to the water from the place where ships are built or repaired
ways
easy
way
to encourage people to use bicycles.In
this
ways
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way
, people not only will they benefit in terms of
health but
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health, but
pollution
will be
also
reduced.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

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