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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In any underdeveloped country, providing
the good
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the best
better
 health, education and trade
is
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are
 essential for the development. Industrialized countries should take the additional responsibility of developing these sectors in the poorer nations. I completely agree with the statement, it will be a long and tough road ahead for less privileged countries to take on
challenge
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the challenge
a challenge
challenges
 on their own, receiving the external help is the best way forward. Poorer nations often lack an expertise and determination to establish the guidelines for the development of any sector and of course funds deficiency hinders the growth plans. At the same time, the poorer states should acknowledge the underlying problems like corruption and mismanagement of the resources. There are many countries on earth that are rich in the natural resources, yet they struggle to provide the daily needs to their citizens, poverty will go nowhere until these fundamental issues are addressed. Developed nations have to work with the responsible authorities and NGO’s
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on
 framing laws that
brings
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bring
 in accountability into the government workforce. If the concerns of poor nations are not addressed, it is going to have a ripple effect on the advanced countries. People will try to migrate either legally or illegally to the other states in search of
better life
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a better life
 and many people might lose their lives on the way. In recent history, hundreds of people died while trying to illegally migrate to Europe from the Africa and
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the middle
 east. To conclude, I agree
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on
 that the developed countries should take more responsibilities in the development of poorer nations. It has to be
collective effort
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a collective effort
, not limited to either one of the sides.
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