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Many people are choosing to find information on line rather than in books. Is this development positive or negative ?

#people #information #line #books #development
Nowadays,
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 has
gain
Suggestion
gained
 a lot of attention in terms of searching for
information
 by most of them
Instead
 of books. As there are plenty of resources to
gain
information
 through
browser
Suggestion
a browser
.
However
, online
information
 sometime is not that legitimate. But, books are genuine. One must respect books, as
author
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the author
 puts his whole life experience. I think it is a positive
move but
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move, but
 at the same
time it
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time, it
 completely depends upon the kind of
information
looking
tell anonymously
leaking
. It is very comfortable to look for something to
gain
 knowledge and
also
 from various sources. Online
information
 gets updated
in
Suggestion
at
 regular interval, it does not take much
time
 to look for the
information
 which we are looking for and it is
fascination
Suggestion
fascinating
 to know the reaction of a other members, as it is a global platform.
Such
 as we you are reading a blog which it get updated on a regular basis, at the same
time
 we
also
 get to know the feedback of other reader around the world.
However
, there is no guarantee that all
information
 on the internet is true, you can get into trouble by reading wrong. But, Books are a complete life experience of an author.
Such
 as, if you are following a technical blog, which consist of latest gadget
information but
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information, but
 there are hidden truth which blogger
don’t know
Suggestion
doesn’t know
 as blogger didn’t
used
Suggestion
use
 that gadget completely. So there is a small fear of
gain
 false
information
. To conclude, though it is a positive move to get
information
form
a giver or sender
from
 various
source
Suggestion
sources
 on the
internet but
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internet, but
 at the same
time
 we cannot completely trust
such
information
, I believe.

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