Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Studying a
second
language
has become an indispensable
part especially
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part, especially
globalization
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globalized
in recent years as a marked milestone. Some people argue that the main role of learning a foreign
language
is that working or
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
abroad while I believe that there are
also
many other reasons for
this
circumstance. On the one hand, one of the main aims of the foreign
language
to overseas tourism or jobs.
First
of all, foreign
language
pave the way for the relationship of people around the world as
an
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a
good way which enable them to interact with each
orther
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
others
outer
more easily. Many people struggle with
language
issues, they
can not
can not
cannot
talk or understand what foreign people say.
For example
, in some Asian countries where the foreign
language
abilities did not develop, it is a concerning issue due to the lack of indigenous
residents
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residents'
resident's
resident
knowledge about foreign
language
when they attempt to talk to overseas residents so foreign people have to learn native
language
.
On the other hand
, foreign
language
is not only support people when they go
abroad but
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abroad, but
it
also help
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also helps
has also helped
them even in their countries.
For instance
, there are a lot of international companies so people need
improve
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to improve
their abilities to use at least one more
language
which bring benefits to their jobs
such
as high salaries, proper positions and so on.
Furthermore
, the development of tourism as a smokeless industry enhances the income of indigenous residents these
days but
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days, but
that mean local people
have to often expose
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have too often exposed
have too often expose
to people who come from other countries.
For example
, if local people take advantage of advertising opportunities with
foreigners they
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foreigners, they
able to sell more goods and promote their countries to friends in the world. To conclude, it
seem
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seems
like
bring
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bringing
more benefits to people who working or travelling
abroad but
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abroad, but
I strongly believe that
learing
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
learn
foreign
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a foreign language
foreign languages
language
can support people even in their daily life and making people in the world get closer together.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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