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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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On the graph we can clearly see when the peaks of the
temperature
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 are. The highest temperatures are in April and May. After May temperatures
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 to continuously decrease until December when it is the coldest and the
temperature
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 is around 20 degrees Celsius. After January
temperature
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 starts increasing significantly until April. We can
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 see, that there is not very strong correlation between
temperature
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 and precipitation. Most of the
rainfall
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 occurs in July and August. After that
rainfall
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 drops quickly between September and November when it is heading to minimum in December. In the beginning of the year
rainfall
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 starts slightly rising until April.
More visible change
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The most visible change
Most visible change
 in the
rainfall
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 starts in May and continues until July when it hits the maximum of the year.
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