a colleague at work is organizing a goodbye party which you are not able to attend . write a letter to him / her . * explain reason why you cannot attend * good memories you have spent * how you will stay in touch

Dear Monica
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I hope
this
letter finds you in
pink
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the pink
of your health and I am writing
this
letter to say my inconvenience to attend the party that you arranged
on
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for
next
Monday
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I know that
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,
it will be a crucial day because you decided to leave from our company
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Unfortunately
,
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,
due to some personal circumstances
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,
I am unable to attend the party
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As you know that, for the past few months I am
suffered
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suffering
with some health issues and my doctor suggest me a treatment for one week duration
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It includes a small surgery
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so
to a very great extent or degree
So
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I need to admit on
this
Sunday and the treatment ends on
next
Sunday
.
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I still remember that
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,
we
are atarted
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have started
are started
start
our career on the same day and we shared a lot of beautiful moments together
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You are my good friend forever
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I enjoyed moments with
you especially
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you, especially
at
time
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the time
of our
last
holiday trip to
mysoor
a city in southern India to the southwest of Bangalore
Mysore
.
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I feel very sad and lonely because of your absence.
please
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Please
don't irate with my absence in your party and I will
definitly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
come to your home after treatment
.
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would like to keep the relationship with you because you are my best friend
.
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I will call you after
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I
returned from hospital. I look forward to receiving your
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a statement (either spoken or written) that is made to reply to a question or request or criticism or accusation
reply
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You
rs lovingly , Liya
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