The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates information about the
price
changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks.
Also
, it
is gives
Suggestion
gives
the the
definite article
the
consumer
price
index in the US during a period of 16
year
Suggestion
years
starts from 1979 till 2009.
First
of all
,
Accept space
,
in 1979 all categories were similar the change was approximately 50 and after one and half year the cost has increased to 100 and remained stable till 1986.
However
, in 1991 the fresh fruits and vegetables
price
was fluctuated and it has reached the peak in 2008 but after that it was gradually declined.While, carbonated drinks
has slightely risen
Suggestion
have slightly risen
has slightly risen
until 2009
.
Accept space
.
Moreover
, the consumer
price
index from 1990 to 2009 has stably increased and it has
leveoff
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love-affair
from 2007 to 2009.Meanwhile, sugars and sweets cost was slightly erratic during the years. In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
it is clear that in the US the fresh fruits and vegetables
price
is
sighificantly
in a statistically significant way
significantly
higher than others.
even
used as an intensive especially to indicate something unexpected
Even
with the slight
decreas
decrease in size, extent, or range
decrease
in 2009, it
is remain
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has remained
remains
the highest number. While, the cost of carbonated drinks was the lowest.

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