The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates information about the

price

changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks.

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consumer

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index in the US during a period of 16

year

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starts

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from 1979 till 2009. First of all,in 1979 all categories were similar the change was approximately 50 and after one and half

year

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the cost

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increased to 100 and remained stable till 1986.

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, in 1991 the fresh fruits and vegetables

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was fluctuated

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and it has reached

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peak in 2008 but after

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was

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gradually declined.

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carbonated drinks

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slightely

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slightly

risen until 2009 .

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, the consumer

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index from 1990 to 2009 has stably increased and it has leveoff from 2007 to 2009.Meanwhile,

sugars

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and sweets cost

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slightly erratic during the years. In conclusion,

it is clear that

in the US the fresh fruits and vegetables

price

sighificantly

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significantly

higher than

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. even with the slight

decreas

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decrease

in 2009, it

is remain

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the highest number.

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the cost of carbonated drinks was the lowest.

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177 words

6.50

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