The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The chart compares the
propotions
the quotient obtained when the magnitude of a part is divided by the magnitude of the whole
proportion
of Australian men and women doing regular physical
activity
in 2010. There were six of
age
groups which
were divide
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divided
by the
age
range
.
First
of all, it was
cleared
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clear
that the
percentage
of male doing physical
activity
in the
age
range
of 15 to 24 reached its
percentage
, at 52.8
% which
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%, which
was higher than
female's
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the female's percentage
percentage
by
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of
5%. On the one hand, there was a significant drop rate of men in the
age
range
of 25 to 34 by 10%.
On the other hand
, with the same
age
group
, the
percentage
of women rose slightly around 2%.
Secondly
, there was a tendency rising of women's
percentage
in the
age
range
between 25 to 64. It was important to note that, the
percentage
of women's doing physical
activity
rising dramatically from 48.9% in
age
group
of 25 to 34 to 53% in the
age
group
of 55 to 64.
Nonetheless
, the men's rate kept its steadily around 44%. In the
age
group
of 65 and over, the
percentage
of women and men kept the same
percentage
. In general, the
bart
a room or establishment where alcoholic drinks are served over a counter
bar
beat
pert
chart depicted the
percentage
of men and women doing regular physical
activity
in 2010.

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