The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The chart compares the
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proportions
proportion
men
and women
doing regular physical activity
in 2010. There were six of
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age
groups which were divide
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divided
the
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age
range
.
First of all, it was cleared
that the Replace the word
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males
activity
in the age
range
of 15 to 24 reached its percentage
, at 52.8% which was higher than female's
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the female's
percentage
by 5%. On the one hand, there was a significant drop rate of men
in the age
range
of 25 to 34 by 10%. On the other hand
, with the same age
group
, the percentage
of women
rose slightly around
2%.
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Secondly
, there was a tendency rising
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of
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in
women
's percentage
in the age
range
between 25 to 64. It was important to note that, the percentage
of women
's doing physical activity
rising
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rose
age
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the age
group
of 25 to 34 to 53% in the age
group
of 55 to 64. Nonetheless
, the men
's rate kept its steadily
around 44%. In the Change the word
steady
age
group
of 65 and over, the percentage
of women
and men
kept the same percentage
.
In general, the bart
chart depicted the Correct your spelling
bar
percentage
of men
and women
doing regular physical activity
in 2010.Submitted by dsfsd on
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