The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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proportions

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of Australian

men

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and

women

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doing regular physical

activity

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in 2010. There were six

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age

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groups which were

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by

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age

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. First of all, it was

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that the

percentage

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of

male

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doing physical

activity

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in the

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of 15 to 24 reached its

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, at 52.8% which was higher than

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percentage

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by 5%. On the one hand, there was a significant drop rate of

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in the

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of 25 to 34 by 10%.

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, with the same

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, the

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of

women

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rose slightly

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2%.

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, there was a tendency

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in the

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between 25 to 64. It was important to note that, the

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of

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's doing physical

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dramatically from 48.9% in

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group

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of 25 to 34 to 53% in the

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group

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of 55 to 64.

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, the

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's rate kept its

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around 44%. In the

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group

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of 65 and over, the

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of

women

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and

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kept the same

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. In general, the

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bar

chart depicted the

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of

men

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and

women

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doing regular physical

activity

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in 2010.