Some people think planes are the better mode of transportation between cities, while others believe trains are better. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some say that planes are better when travelling between cities while others argue that trains are the better ones. Though ticket
fare
in trains
are
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is
cheaper, I believe that planes help people to reach the destination in short span of
time
. On the one hand, it is believed that ticket cost in trains
are
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is
economical
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economically
and exceptionally low compared to
airplanes
. As the ticket cost in trains includes only the basic
fare
unlike the
fare including
Accept comma addition
fare, including
of taxes
such
as goods and services taxes and other
amenities
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amenity
charges to be paid in planes.
For instance
, the average train
fare
for a passenger between Chennai and Delhi is around 900 INR, whereas the same costs to around 15,000 INR in
airplanes
.
However
, I believe that though
they
of them or themselves
their
costs low, planes are considered as
fastest
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fast
to
travel
between cities.
On the other hand
, considering the
time
taken to
travel
between the cities, planes are always preferred as they
travel
at high speed.
This
is because of the speed they
travel
, they reach longer distance in less
time
compared to trains.
For instance
, the
time
taken to reach Chennai to Delhi in
airplane
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an airplane
is less than 3
hours whereas
Accept comma addition
hours, whereas
the same would take nearly 3 days when travelled
in
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by
train. I am of the view that planes
reduces
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reduce
people’s
travel
time enabling
Accept comma addition
time, enabling
them to reach longer
distance
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distances
in less
time
. To conclude, while trains allow people to
travel
between cities in low cost, I believe that planes are considerably faster and saves people’s
travel
time
to a great extent.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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