Some believe that is is the responsibility of people to take care about the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

It is argued, regarding environmental safety where one-half of people believe that
individual citizen
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individual citizens
an individual citizen
the individual citizen
should be responsible to safeguard
environment whereas
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the environment, whereas
the environment whereas
the other half thinks that the government should take a major role in protecting the
environment
.
This
essay discusses both the aspects before reaching a final verdict.
Firstly
, let us consider the measures that common people should implement to preserve the
environment
.
First
and foremost thing is to avoid dumping of garbages on roads or in nearby
Canal which
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Canal, which
gets clogged and leads to flooding, a serious disaster which destroys the
environment
. Apart from that controlling pollution is
also
in the hands of people by reducing car usages. To cite an example, if fossil fuel cars are avoided,
therefore
, decreases the emission of carbon
dioxide which
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dioxide, which
in turn avoids global warming which is the major issue currently faced by the world.
Nevertheless
, not only people even the government has to take stringent action by creating awareness among the people by hosting awareness programs or by enforcing any law which reduces the environmental hazards.
For
instance in
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instance, in
Tamilnadu recently a law has been passed against the usage of plastic, which is a key material to cause a detrimental effect on nature since it is a non-biodegradable waste.
This
rule is followed strictly by each and every person in Tamilnadu which is an initiation for protecting the
environment
from deterioration. To conclude,
although
the government takes measures to protect the
environment
, it is the responsibility of the people to take proactive measures by following the rules strictly with full determination and avoid causing pollution by restricting car usage which will be beneficial for nature.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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