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People doing dangerous sport activities like scuba diving and bungee jumping, they should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people. Do you agree or disagree?

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Extreme sport has gained popularity these past few years as one of leisure activities for those who love daring stunts.
Although
 these
type
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types
 of sports can be exhilarating, it could potentially
harms
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harm
 one's
life
. Some
agrued
present reasons and arguments
argued
agreed
 that rescuers should not risk their
life
 to save those in danger while participating in those sports as they must already
realised
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realise
 the consequences of
joing
the act of departing
going
doing
 it. I have to agree with the fact that rescue workers should allow to choose whether to save or not.
First
 of all, the individuals who join these events are already well aware of the consequences of these risky activities. They need to get
permit
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permission
 for them to do these activities,
therefore
 they usually experts or well-trained.
Besides
 that, training procedures and
life
skilld
an ability that has been acquired by training
skills
 are being taught to them in case of any alarming
situation
 happened to them. It is their responsibility to be aware of their
situation
 and their risk of those activities. Rescue workers can only save risk-takers only if the
situation
 doesn't place them in danger as well.
Moreover
,
rescuer
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the rescuer
have
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has
 specific SOP when they engaged to
life-threatening
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a life-threatening situation
situation
. Despite of that, it is unworthy for them to risk their
life
 ignoring the protocol just for the sake of adrenaline rush. There were cases where firemen died trying to save a man who bungee jumping without the safety belt. Imagine the faces of the family of the rescuer knowing he or she died just because of saving a person who
careless
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cares
cared
 with risking their
life
. To sum up, I strongly agree the fact that rescue worker
have
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has
 the right to engage rescue mission of these daredevils unless it is too risky.
Altough
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Although
 it seemed ironic, but it is
for
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in
 the best interest
for
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of
 both of the parties.
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