People doing dangerous sport activities like scuba diving and bungee jumping, they should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people. Do you agree or disagree?

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Extreme sport has gained popularity these past few years as one of leisure activities for those who love daring stunts.

Although

these

type

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types

of sports can be exhilarating, it could potentially

harms

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harm

one's

life

. Some

agrued

present reasons and arguments

argued

agreed

that rescuers should not risk their

life

to save those in danger while participating in those sports as they must already

realised

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realise

the consequences of

joing

the act of departing

going

doing

it. I have to agree with the fact that rescue workers should allow to choose whether to save or not.

First

of all, the individuals who join these events are already well aware of the consequences of these risky activities. They need to get

permit

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permission

for them to do these activities,

therefore

they usually experts or well-trained.

Besides

that, training procedures and

life

skilld

an ability that has been acquired by training

skills

are being taught to them in case of any alarming

situation

happened to them. It is their responsibility to be aware of their

situation

and their risk of those activities. Rescue workers can only save risk-takers only if the

situation

doesn't place them in danger as well.

Moreover

rescuer

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the rescuer

have

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has

specific SOP when they engaged to

life-threatening

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a life-threatening situation

situation

. Despite of that, it is unworthy for them to risk their

life

ignoring the protocol just for the sake of adrenaline rush. There were cases where firemen died trying to save a man who bungee jumping without the safety belt. Imagine the faces of the family of the rescuer knowing he or she died just because of saving a person who

careless

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cares

cared

with risking their

life

. To sum up, I strongly agree the fact that rescue worker

have

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has

the right to engage rescue mission of these daredevils unless it is too risky.

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Although

it seemed ironic, but it is

for

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the best interest

for

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both of the parties.

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Overall Band Score

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

high-risk sports
extreme sports
responsibility
rescue efforts
ethical obligations
professional duties
safety measures
preparation
training
equipment
precautionary measures
public resources
rescue missions
social implications
economic implications
risk-awareness
moral responsibility
self-reliance
consequence management
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People doing dangerous sport activities like scuba diving and bungee jumping, they should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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