Question: the government should make people take responsibility for their action to the environment. To what extent do you agree?

#government #people #responsibility #action #environment

Today

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Today's

environment is not only damaged by plants or

cars but

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cars, but

by people’s individual attitude toward it, as well. Some people’s promotion about a concept that, governments should share their environmental responsibility with their inhabitants as well, is not on par with adherents of

this

notion.

Nevertheless

, I strongly concur with that idea due to

plethora

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the plethora

a plethora

of cogent reasons.

This

essay will divulge these reasons and draw appropriate conclusion. Above all, the adverse impact that persons have been

making

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made

, is

crucial factor

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a crucial factor

the crucial factor

that had cajoled the government to come up with

this

initiative. The implementation of

this

would ameliorate the acute environmental situation,

such

as littering or even air pollution.

For instance

, if people take responsibility for their every action to the environment, the heartbreaking advancement of the

nature

a vaguely specified concern

matter

would be reduced.

Consequently

, the negative influence of people may be eradicated or altered to the positive one.

Furthermore

, intention of every person for environmental healthy milieu would be

large step

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a large step

toward the addressing the natural issues. To illustrate that more, littering would be perfect example, which requires every single person’s attention to be solved and government have found out the remedy via drawing attention their dwellers. If

this

sort of problematic conditions had been solved not only on

global level but

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a global level, but

a global level but

the global level but

also

with individuals simultaneously,

this

problems

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problem

that we are confronting would have already been

overcame

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overcome

. The conclusion to be drawn is that, with collaboration of both sides, authorities and individuals

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environmental difficulties that we have can be coped efficiently and eradicated completely.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

254 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Question: the government should make people take responsibility for their action to the environment. To what extent do you agree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Statement of purpose for PhD application at the University of Maryland.

Some people think children should attend extra classes after school, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that robots are very important for human future development. Others argue that the invention of robots has negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion

As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that drivers should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.