Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?

Mothers and fathers motivate their kids to
work
on some days throughout the week.
This
essay will
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
the benefits and drawbacks of
this
trend. There are many positive aspects of pushing children into employment from a young age.
Firstly
, they get to gain
work
experience and learn basic qualities like respect, and how to value money.
This
is because, a job usually starts in set business hours.
Furthermore
, when someone earns their money for the
first
time, it gives them insight on how to save and spend it.
For example
, when
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
was 12
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
worked at KFC, it
taught
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has taught
me to always be on time, because at
first
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
was not punctual, as well as, it
also
taught me to respect my elders and how to be financially independent. Overall,
this
trend is advantageous. Despite the many benefits, there are
also
drawbacks. Many believe that a
childs
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child's
child
only job is to have fun.
Therefore
, any alteration in
this
ideology
,
Accept space
,
like
work
, is considered child labour. The reason for
this
is that, kids cannot make their own decisions, so it is seen as against their will.
In addition
to
this
, in order for under 18's to be happy they should lead carefree lives, ridden of the burden of responsibility and finances,
work
has been proven to be detrimental to one's mental health. To illustrate, a study published in 1990 on the Childrens
Work
Commitee
a special group delegated to consider some matter
Committee
showed that 99% of children who worked under the age of 12 were morbidly depressed. In conclusion, there are many pro's and con's of youngster employment. In the
future i
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future, I
future I
hope that they are given the choice of whether or not they want to
work
.

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