These days, a lot of people have their own computer and telephone, it has become quit easy do job from home. Do you think it has more advantages and disadvantages of work from home?

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undeniably

true that a globe is unimaginable without profession. In fact, career is omnipresent. Just as every coin has a flip side job from at

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brings both the positive as well as negative impact on our life. I would elucidate the pros and cons of it in the following paragraphs, but in my ideology, I am in consummate dis-accord with the following paragraph. It has myriad merit and demerits. The

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and predominant one is masses

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from

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due to become doing a job at

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there is no

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approval to do something

permission

promotion

in future.

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, an individual’s will not salary packages increasing. To exemplify

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point, we can consider it, which is all workers are working at

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Afrocentrism 5 to 6 hours under the companies in a long time.

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, their income recourse is very less.

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, they did not have any extra skill and a guidance.

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, one more convincing point that cannot be ignored is communication, which advocates that they have not

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experienced

how to communicate with the each other by the reason of folks do not

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participate in an outdoor

activity. To justify, I would quote the example of employee is not

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expressed

their feelings and ideas, which is an evident proof of

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phenomenon. So, they are

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facing

myriad problems relating to

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. In conclusion, I recapitulate that there are innumerable strong arguments supporting professions is

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in our personality and communication. Human being by the get good marks

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the low salary

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and workers are not sharing their ideas regarding to the

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and not a good experience.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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287 words

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These days, a lot of people have their own computer and telephone, it has become quit easy do job from home. Do you think it has more advantages and disadvantages of work from home?

Fully explain your ideas

The values we gain from our parents and family have more influence over our future success than any skills or knowledge learned in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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we live in a world of technology these days. While the Internet brings it with clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and there is a lack of a sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?