Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as the older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say local authorities should allow to people to build house in the style of their own choice.

People have different views on the
stucture
a thing constructed; a complex entity constructed of many parts
structure
of the houses as some
agrued
present reasons and arguments
argued
agreed
that new homes should built in the same condition as the other older houses. Meanwhile, some suggest it would be better to design the
homes according
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homes, according
to the owner's preferences. In
this
essay, both of these
notion
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notions
will be discuss
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will be discussed
further
.
First
of all, constructing a similar blueprint as
the old
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older
the older
homes has its' perks. It lends a classic look to the neighbourhood.
Besides
that, the residents will feel the sense of equality as it gives the impression of the neighbourhood standard of living is similar to theirs.
Furthermore
, the architects usually design the houses based on
condition
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the condition
of the land and functionality of
structure
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the structure
of the every part of the abode.
Therefore
, altering the structure of the homes may be unsuitable to live.
For example
, the extending the height of walls can be a huge issue if the resident unable to escape during
emergency situation
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emergency situations
an emergency situation
.
On the other hand
, designing
homes according
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homes, according
to the owner's
tast
the sensation that results when taste buds in the tongue and throat convey information about the chemical composition of a soluble stimulus
taste
test
text
may not be
such
a bad idea. Ones would say a home is a reflection of the householder's personality and similar home styles lack of character.
Moreover
, special
features in
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features, in
the house
is needed
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are needed
if the tenant is disable or to make their
living
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lives
more comfortable.
For instance
, a
disable
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disabled
person may need a rail in the house
instead
of stair in order for them to move freely around the house.
In addition
to that, adding
CCTV camera
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a CCTV camera
CCTV cameras
to
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for
at
modern home
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the modern home
, aid in preventing burglar entry. In conclusion, though traditional homes
is
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are
safer, in my opinion, modern touch in the abode would be a better as long as the construction
follow
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follows
the essential safety measure and more functional.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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