You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Babu. I noticed your advertisement in The Hindu dated 22-04-2019 about the job opening for the position of

project

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the project

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manager in your organisation. I would like to apply for that position. I'm currently residing in Chennai with my family. My wife is a housemaker and my son just turned one,

last

month. My present company is HCL Technologies India Pvt Limited, managing a 10 member team. Our client Merck & Co, which is one of the top pharmaceutical research industry in

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. My exact role is to allocate the work to my

reporties

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reports

on daily basis and to mentor them.

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, I am providing internal

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training

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to new

joinees

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joiners

in our project.

Trainings

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Training

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will include both

Technical

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and organisational practices. My overall

experice

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experience

is 10 years and around 4 years in project and people management. With

this

experience, I feel that I'll be more suitable for the position, which you have posted. Thanks

Submitted by e.babuganesh on Wed Apr 24 2019

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

158 words

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You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

How does the film Green Book illustrate the effects of racial segregation on personal relationships?

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

Some believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion