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You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Babu. I noticed your advertisement in The Hindu dated 22-04-2019 about the job opening for the position of
project
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 manager in your organisation. I would like to apply for that position. I'm currently residing in Chennai with my family. My wife is a housemaker and my son just turned one,
last
 month. My present company is HCL Technologies India Pvt Limited, managing a 10 member team. Our client Merck & Co, which is one of the top pharmaceutical research industry in
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. My exact role is to allocate the work to my
reporties
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reports
 on daily basis and to mentor them.
Also
, I am providing internal
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 to new
joinees
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joiners
 in our project.
Trainings
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 will include both
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 and organisational practices. My overall
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experience
 is 10 years and around 4 years in project and people management. With
this
 experience, I feel that I'll be more suitable for the position, which you have posted. Thanks
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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