You would like to join the local orchestra. Write a letter of application to the orchestra. In the letter: – Introduce yourself and your instrument of choice – Explain how your credentials make you a good candidate – Express your enthusiasm for music

I am writing
this
letter to express my interest regarding the various
position
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positions
available in the sole mate
cachestra
Last
day I saw an adverts in a local newspaper. My name is Mary and I have completed my bachelors in Music.
Basically I
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Basically, I
am a violinist, but
also
studied flute from a Private institution.I have a few years experience in
violine
bowed stringed instrument that is the highest member of the violin family; this instrument has four strings and a hollow body and an unfretted fingerboard and is played with a bow
violin
valuing
.
Firstly
,
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,
I enrolled in a small music
group which
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group, which
is run by Fr. Alex.
who
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Who
is a priest in St. Francis Church
.
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.
Moreover
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
also
played violin in some reality Shows. After completion of my degree, I would like to improve and learn more about other instruments. I am a gold
medalist
someone who has won a medal
medallist
from
Madurai violin competition
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the Madurai violin competition
. I think these credentials are the plus point in my career. - I would appreciate if you could consider me to your orchestra
.
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.
It will be a create pleasure if you could provide for me. My resume is attached
with
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to
this
letter and consider me as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hear from you.
yours
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Yours
faithfully Mary.
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