Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

From the moment, people started living together as
one
unit which is famously known as
family
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a family
families
, its norms and
costumes
money collected under a tariff
customs
have been changing nonstop. These days, lots of mothers and fathers motivate their children to leave
home
when they are 18 or older, whereas some believe that their young ones are better off living with them. Leaving our hometown and family behind, has a strong plethora of promises. For
one
, a promise of becoming independent, both financially and spiritually.
This
means that, since you are earning money and not your guardians, you get to decide on how to spend your income. Whether to save your salary in a saving account for a rainy day, or go on a fashion spree is utterly your choice. Another promise would be that while living alone is an experience that undoubtedly transform people not only to adults, but
also
to more mature humans.
Take
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Tackle
repetitive chores as an example.By solely depending on yourself to do housework
such
as vacuuming and dusting, washing up and doing the laundry,
grocessry
a marketplace where groceries are sold
grocery
shopping and sorting out mails,
one
can count on the fact that they could take care of themselves
in addition
to maintaining a stable life and
home
. Not being in the same
home
as your parents might
also
create an opportunity for some to see the world, experience wild and unimaginable adventures
first
hand which can lead to the feeling of belonging and actually being a true member of the society.
However
, in my viewpoint, staying with
family
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the family
definitely contains more realistic prospects rather than some hard to reach promises. If
one
decide
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decides
has decided
is deciding
to keep on staying with their parents, they most probably do not need to seek for a job, or they should not be anxious about paying bills or rent.
This
could tremendously reduce the stress level that others face in their workplace or when they are desperately trying to make ends meet.
Furthermore
, these privileged people could spend their time and focus on flourishing their abilities
.
Accept space
.
Studying for tertiary education in high-ranked universities, making progress in athletic activities or simply following their childhood dreams without any kind of worries
are
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is
just to name a few.
In addition
, these lucky young adults are surrounded by their loved ones at all times and continually obtain the love and support from their families. Unlike others, who unfortunately could only manage to see their parents on special occasions
such
as Christmas, if they could afford the commuting expenses and
also
, if they have met all their deadlines at work. In many countries
such
as Japan, people had been living with their parents for
genertions
all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age
generations
.
This
,
Accept space
,
as studies have shown,
have led
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has led
had led
to stronger cultural and family bonding, which is brutally rare in Western countries where children say goodbye to their family at a very young age. To conclude,
although
living independently paints a promising and a luring picture for our future, staying
home
with family could create a true and reliable chance for us to follow our dreams and desires in the comfort of
home
in the presence of our loving and supporting family.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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