Recently you have travelled by plane and during the journey you had an issue with one of airline employee. Write a letter to the company manager and say Give details of your flight Discuss the issue you have encountered What do you expect the nature to do

Dear sir I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction during the journey with your Airlines. I boarded your flight number B12W from Mumbai to Delhi on 5th of
this
month. During the transit
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have faced an issue with one of your
employee
Suggestion
employees
at
luggage drop
Suggestion
the luggage drop
in point, the
incharge
contribute to the progress or growth of
encourage
employee
is Sam pictures is having
employee
identification number H1126.
Although
, your advertisement and tickets highlighted that
maximum weight limit
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the maximum weight limit
for luggage is 15 kilos per person
,
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,
to my surprise the
employee
at the counter argue that limit is 10 kilos only.
As a result
,
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,
I have been charged extra for the remaining luggage
.
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.
Moreover
,
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,
I have not been given any charge receipt for extra payment I was asked
made
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to make
. I would like you to look into the matter and take a stringent action on
this
person, if found guilty of being corrupt
.
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.
In case if the charges are wrongly imprinted
then
I would expect you to compensate me for the inconvenience faced, with a refund of ticket charges and extra baggage charges I paid
.
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.
I am waiting for positive response from your side. Your sincerely
Submitted by naresh on

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