Recently you have travelled by plane and during the journey you had an issue with one of airline employee. Write a letter to the company manager and say Give details of your flight Discuss the issue you have encountered What do you expect the nature to do

Dear sir I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction during the journey with your Airlines. I boarded your flight number B12W from Mumbai to Delhi on

5th

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the 5th

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this

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month. During the transit

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have faced an issue with one of your

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employee

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employees

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luggage

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the luggage

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drop in

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drop-in

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point, the

incharge

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in charge

employee

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is Sam pictures is having

employee

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identification number H1126.

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, your advertisement and tickets highlighted that

maximum

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the maximum

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weight limit for luggage is 15 kilos per person , to my surprise the

employee

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at the

counter argue

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that limit is 10 kilos only.

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,I have been charged extra for the remaining luggage .

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, I have not been given any charge receipt for

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the extra

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payment I was asked

made

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to make

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. I would like you to look into the matter and take

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apply

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a stringent

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astringent

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action on

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person

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apply

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if found guilty of being corrupt .In case if the charges are wrongly imprinted

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I would expect you to compensate me for the inconvenience faced, with a refund of ticket charges and extra baggage charges I paid . I am waiting for

positive

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a positive

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response from your side.

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Yours

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Your

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Yours

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sincerely

naresh

Apr 26, 2019

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

192 words

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