Recently you have travelled by plane and during the journey you had an issue with one of airline employee. Write a letter to the company manager and say Give details of your flight Discuss the issue you have encountered What do you expect the nature to do

Dear sir I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction during the journey with your Airlines. I boarded your flight number B12W from Mumbai to Delhi on
5th
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the 5th

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of
this
month. During the transit
i
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I

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have faced an issue with one of your
employee
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employees

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at
luggage
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the luggage

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drop in
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drop-in

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point, the
incharge
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in charge

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employee
is Sam pictures is having
employee
identification number H1126.
Although
, your advertisement and tickets highlighted that
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weight limit for luggage is 15 kilos per person , to my surprise the
employee
at the
counter argue
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counter-argue

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that limit is 10 kilos only.
As a result
,I have been charged extra for the remaining luggage .
Moreover
, I have not been given any charge receipt for
extra
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the extra

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payment I was asked
made
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to make

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. I would like you to look into the matter and take
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apply

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a stringent
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astringent

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action on
this
person
,
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apply

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if found guilty of being corrupt .In case if the charges are wrongly imprinted
then
I would expect you to compensate me for the inconvenience faced, with a refund of ticket charges and extra baggage charges I paid . I am waiting for
positive
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a positive
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response from your side.
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Yours

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Your
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sincerely
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