One of the best method to motivate and encourage worker is to pay them according to what they produce and sell. You think this is the best method? Relevant examples from your experience.

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Force
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in animation is considered to be a vital element
,
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,
certaining
include or contain; have as a component
containing
its
production
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abilities. 10 how the workers are to be paid is a very crucial
decisions
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decision
. Paying workers on the basis of
production
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and sales undertaken by them is a method used generally.
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However I
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However, I
do not consider it to be the best one.My Opinion will be justified in ensuring paragraphs.
To begin
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with,
production
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and sales
depends
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depend
on external factors climatic conditions and market forces.
For example
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, in agriculture sector
production
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can be reduced if their is drought or flood.
Similarly
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, can be affected if the demand of the product in the market because of
availability
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the availability
of alternate product. Pages or remunerations set on
level
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the level
of sales and
production
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made
how something is done or how it happens
mode
is not justified.
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, variable payment system exploitation of
work
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force
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. As the control lies in the hands of Companies and corporate for deciding what is to be paid. In poor countries, Bangladesh,
for instance
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, the
work
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force
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with no
predecided
make a prediction about; tell in advance
predicted
payment
rules foreign
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rules, foreign
companies exploit the label class by undertaking them stating their low sales as a reason.
This
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, in order to curb
such
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Mal practices and to present
work
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force
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's interest government should set minimum wage
criteria ensuring
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criteria, ensuring
that workers are
payed
marked by the reception of pay
paid
at least good enough to support their basic needs.
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However extra
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However, extra
incentives can be paid depending on manufacturing and sales achieved.
This
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will motivate the
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work
the force of workers available
workforce
force
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and help developing level of satisfaction among them. In conclusion, in order to safeguard the interest of the labours or workers it is must for government to ensure that they are paid enough
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;
to achieve good livelihood.
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,
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,
deciding remunerations on what is
produced sold
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produced, sold
is not a
best
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good
approach
.
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.
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