some people say that history is one of the most important school subjects, other people think that, in today's world , subjects like science and technology are more important than history. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In
this
era of great
develpment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
, modern studies seem
most attractive
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more attractive
to many, but to some,
history
is still
course
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coursing
of paramount interest.
Although
,
breathroughs
a productive insight
breakthroughs
of
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in
science and technology has made lives largely
depenedent
relying on or requiring a person or thing for support, supply, or what is needed
dependent
dependant
on them, but In my opinion,
history
holds
equally
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equal
importance, as it preserves tradition and culture of any nation, both
history
and science studies should carry
sequal
having the same quantity, value, or measure as another
equal
weightage in
school syllabus
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the school syllabus
. On the one hand, technological revolutions have gone to
next level
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the next level
to provide
comfort
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comfortable
living.
from
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From
a smart phone to
aero-planes
an aircraft that has a fixed wing and is powered by propellers or jets
aeroplanes
, everything is bound
to
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for
science.It has changed human
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
to an extent that they are dependent on it.
For example
, to secure a job
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
, one needs to be equipped with
necessary level
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the necessary level
of competence in
moder
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
Modern
studies,
that is
why thousands of
pipil
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
compete to get into a university to fulfil dream of better living.
On the other hand
,
history
is something that
posseses
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possessed
possesses
realm of human life in the past, it
depeicts
show in, or as in, a picture
depicts
tradition and culture of any nation, nations are known because of their historical marvels.
For example
,
Pyramids
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the Pyramids
in Egypt,
archeological
related to or dealing with or devoted to archaeology
archaeological
excavations have revealed, how these giant
structed
having definite and highly organized structure
structured
were anchored
on
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in
to
the earth is even not possible by the cutting edge technology of recent times. In my opinion, educational
istitutes
set up or lay the groundwork for
institutes
have a prime responsibility to lay
down a balanced
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down to a balanced
corriculom
an integrated course of academic studies
curriculum
for their students,
history
and advance subjects both carrying equal marks In conclusion, it is an undeniable fact, technological progress is at
climax
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the climax
and no country can prosper without having a proper work force in
this
arena, without the knowledge of past new generations would more like robots, who know how to work but unaware of their cultural values.
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