some people say that history is one of the most important school subjects, other people think that, in today's world , subjects like science and technology are more important than history. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In
this
era of great develpment
, modern studies seem act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
most attractive
to many, but to some, Suggestion
more attractive
history
is still course
of paramount interest. Suggestion
coursing
Although
, breathroughs
a productive insight
breakthroughs
of
science and technology has made lives largely Suggestion
in
depenedent
on them, but In my opinion, relying on or requiring a person or thing for support, supply, or what is needed
dependent
dependant
history
holds equally
importance, as it preserves tradition and culture of any nation, both Suggestion
equal
history
and science studies should carry sequal
weightage in having the same quantity, value, or measure as another
equal
school syllabus
.
On the one hand, technological revolutions have gone to Suggestion
the school syllabus
next level
to provide Suggestion
the next level
comfort
living. Suggestion
comfortable
from
a smart phone to Suggestion
From
aero-planes
, everything is bound an aircraft that has a fixed wing and is powered by propellers or jets
aeroplanes
to
science.It has changed human Suggestion
for
life style
to an extent that they are dependent on it. a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
For example
, to secure a job now a days
, one needs to be equipped with the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
necessary level
of competence in Suggestion
the necessary level
moder
studies, belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
Modern
that is
why thousands of pipil
compete to get into a university to fulfil dream of better living.
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
On the other hand
, history
is something that posseses
realm of human life in the past, it Suggestion
possessed
possesses
depeicts
tradition and culture of any nation, nations are known because of their historical marvels. show in, or as in, a picture
depicts
For example
, Pyramids
in Egypt, Suggestion
the Pyramids
archeological
excavations have revealed, how these giant related to or dealing with or devoted to archaeology
archaeological
structed
were anchored having definite and highly organized structure
structured
on
the earth is even not possible by the cutting edge technology of recent times.
In my opinion, educational Suggestion
in
to
istitutes
have a prime responsibility to lay set up or lay the groundwork for
institutes
down a balanced
Suggestion
down to a balanced
corriculom
for their students, an integrated course of academic studies
curriculum
history
and advance subjects both carrying equal marks
In conclusion, it is an undeniable fact, technological progress is at climax
and no country can prosper without having a proper work force in Suggestion
the climax
this
arena, without the knowledge of past new generations would more like robots, who know how to work but unaware of their cultural values.Submitted by ieltsprep63 on
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