Many students are taught to push themselves to try and be better than other students, rather than work together for everyone’s benefits. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that a lot of students are trained to push themselves and compete

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with

their classmates

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of studying in a

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for mutual benefits. While I acknowledge that there are some advantages of competition, I believe that the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits. On the one hand, there are some benefits of competitiveness that are considered as an efficient way to achieve

goal

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the goal

a goal

goals

. The primary benefit is that children will become more mature, independent and dedicated. Competing with others forces students to obtain

high score

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a high score

high scores

in

class

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the class

,

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, they have to equip themselves with a reservoir of knowledge by self-study and searching more materials. Another benefit is competition enable students to have enough

skills to run in

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skills to run

a

harsh

solid-hoofed herbivorous quadruped domesticated since prehistoric times

horse

race in the future.

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, when they are employed, it is possible for them to climb

career ladder

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the career ladder

and

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

ambition of success.

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, it seems to me that

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study is the best choice for student progress.

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, in a

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with mixed-ability students, advanced students can experience the satisfaction of helping less-able learners and modelling more complex ideas.

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practice not only builds confidence in the advanced students but

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helps weak students move forward and have more intriguing learning methods.

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, collaboration requires students to have teamwork and communication skills, which are

practical necessity

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a practical necessity

practical necessities

in their future. By these skills, it is easy for students to get along with their counterpart in their jobs and foster the relationship bond. In conclusion, while competition promotes

self-study ability

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the self - study ability

of children, I believe that studying in a

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should be applied for a majority of students.