Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: • thank them for the photos and for the holiday • explain why you didn't write earlier • invite them to come and stay with you

Dear Tom, I am fine here and hope that you are

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sailing in the same boat.

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week, I got really excited when I received your parcel. As I was leaving for an urgent business trip, I could not acknowledge your letter earlier, for which I apologize.

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of all, the pictures of

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of us bring back many memories of the happy times of my stay at your place. I am grateful for your hospitality and the way you pampered me during my visit was remarkable.

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, the delicious food, amazing sights, excellent cultural events and the evenings filled with laughter gave me

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world experience, for which, I cannot thank you enough. As I am aware of the fact that you are a travel enthusiast, I want to invite you over to my home. In fact, I am even planning to take a week’s holiday if you are willing to come to Canada. While you are here, we will see

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Niagara Falls, Quebec city and even

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zoos and sanctuaries. I am confident that it will be a wonderful experience for you. I hope you will consider my suggestion and spare some time with us at my place. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Take care. Yours Truly, Amanjot Singh

amanjw01

Apr 28, 2019

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