Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in future, such as as related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The desire to make a successful career in life is one reason most people
further
their education by attending the university to
study
their dream course.
However
, some people are increasingly convinced that only subjects with futuristic relevance be studied by students,
instead
of studying their
choice
of subjects, as others would argue. Both views will be discussed below and my opinion stated in
this
essay. Most people believe that some fields of
study
today
,
such
as science and technology is gradually taking over the world;
hence
the need to have more people delve
into
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into such a field
such
field is desired.
For
instance
, having more people
study
courses
such
as medicine would mean having more doctors, which is actually very important in our world
today
.
Similarly
, almost every sphere in life
today
has a touch of technological innovation for daily use.
For
instance
, the use of technology in
seen
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seeing
in every other
profession
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profession such as
such
as in sports, telecommunications, Banking, and Mass communication among others.
Conversely
, Other people feel the
choice
of a student should come
first
, as it would give them a sense of
fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
.
Today
, most people feel fulfilled in doing what they desire irrespective of its relevance in
future
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the future
. The fact that they derive joy from doing what they want actually births the will to succeed more in that field of
study
.
For
instance
, a recent survey conducted by the statistics department of university of Lagos revealed that most students who made poor grades
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
forced by their parents into studying what they did not truly desire.
Consequently
, these students struggle to achieve excellence, but the result
is
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has been
almost always poor.
Furthermore
, the importance of heterogeneity in the world
today
cannot be overemphasized. Musicians
for
instance
, play a key role in soothing the soul of people, even though some individuals might see no futuristic importance in Music. In conclusion, there have been a growing debate on what subject students should
study
. While some people argue that
student s
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
students
should only
study
courses of future
importance
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importance, such
such
as science and technology,
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
feels
otherwise
and opine that student should
study
their
choice
. I am
however
of the opinion that Students should be allowed to
study
their course of
choice
as it gives them a sense of fulfilment and
also
creates diversity in the society.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

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