Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Modern days have become more accustomed to improper diet and irregular food habits with varied reasons like busy schedules at work, rush to office or household works, timings with family, children, friends and many more.
This
has made
drastic change
Suggestion
a drastic change
drastic changes
in human beings' life with many negative impacts resulting in numerous health problems. An individual is facing too many medical issues right from infants till the age of
nineties
Suggestion
the nineties
. As
such
, medical facilities ah as re to be provided adequately to each lame person at the pros and cons of the place. Nationwide support is always important while it pertains to health as the human life is ensured upon the functionality of the body. Organs, blood, Nerves, Muscles, bones and even the hair and skin matters for small note of
illhealth
Suggestion
ill health
. Proper economic growth with accurate planning in the country's
infrastructural
facilities with productive
idealogies
an orientation that characterizes the thinking of a group or nation
ideologies
dialogues
shall obviously, increase the standards of a Nation. So that,
provision
Suggestion
the provision
of medical infrastructural facilities like medicines, drugs, injections, salines, and many more can be abundantly supplied free of cost to every individual whenever essential and whomever applicable for. Government should be spectacular in modernising the way of
such
provisions adding value to human life. Many times, it is noticed that poor people
has
Suggestion
have
no money in hand due to which they are unable to get treated
intimes
Suggestion
in times
of emergency which leads to death. Perhaps, they are not in a position to demand for the necessities and can only lift up their hands.
Moreover
, rural areas are lacking adequate medical facilities and awareness of medication to a larger extent. Despite they rely on the ancient day methods of curing a disease with herbs, leaves and other sort of wild procedures which may or may not work out in resolving the problem.
Besides
,
such
olden paths shall create new problems with severe side effects which later, cannot be solved or understood. Keeping in view all the above, I strongly feel free medical facilities are to be supplied to
every one
all people
everyone
in all the countries to the maximum possible extent with ultimate equipments which are affordable, if not expensive. Conclusively,
such
service can not only increase the Nation's
economy but
Accept comma addition
economy, but
also
ends up in happiness of lives.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

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