In major cities around the world, traffic congestion has become a serious problem. How can this problem be tackled? Give reasons and examples from your own experience

In recent years,
traffic
block has become a major
issues
Suggestion
issue
in both developed and undeveloped countries around the globe. According to a survey conducted by the People’s magazine in 2012, showed that about 95% of all world’s major cities around the globe suffer from
traffic
block which is mainly caused by less public
transport
.
This
essay will discuss causes as well as solutions to
this
issue which would involve provision of more public transportation services. There are several factors contributing to
traffic
jam in our society today. One of
such
main factor is, less public
transport
.
Although
, there are public transportations in major towns around the world, there isn’t enough to reduce
traffic
jams. Take
for instance
, a state like Lagos State in Nigeria, which has a population of over 200 million
people but
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people, but
has only about 10,000 registered public busses and well over a million plus registered private cars. The ratio of public
transport
to private
transport
is overwhelming.
Thus
, creating
traffic blockage
Suggestion
a traffic blockage
around the
city
causes people to miss interviews or appointments.
In addition
, more individuals reside in cities than country sides due to availability of basic amenities
such
as schools, hospitals.
Therefore
, increasing the population in the
city
and
then
increasing
traffic
jams. Tackling
this
issue involves, more public transports and less private transports. If the government, would provide public transportation systems that are convenient as well as conducive
for
Suggestion
to
members of
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
society
this
would greatly reduce
traffic
blocks around various cities. Take
for example
, the
first
city
in the world with the least
traffic
jam- Dubai, who in 2018 had the least
traffic
congestion in the world after their government provided more underground trains and buses for effective transportation.
Furthermore
, the development of the country sides. If every basic amenity
such
as schools, hospitals were found in the
country side
rural regions
countryside
, people will be less compelled to migrate to the
city
thus
, reducing population and in general reducing
traffic
jams. In conclusion, there are many major factors contributing to
traffic
blocks in our society
today
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today, such
such
as, less public
transport
and the major solution to
this
is
provision
Suggestion
the provision
a provision
of more public transports by the government thereby reducing
traffic
jams.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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