Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions vary on whether
History
is less trivial than
Science
and
Technology
. I can understand the reason why some people think that,
however I
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however, I
am opinion of
History
plays a vital role in school. It is undeniable that there are some benefits in studying
History
to some extents. The
first
element is students can gain a vast knowledge about their country
,
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,
for example
, In Vietnam, one of Asian country which suffered from a difficult period time of war and
seperation
the state of lacking unity
separation
,
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,
learning
History
help students enhance their national identity and
patrionism
love of country and willingness to sacrifice for it
patriotism
.
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.
Another point is the fact that enables youngsters to be open to new ideas when pursue to World
history
.
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.
The world development is contributed by much success and failure
,
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,
students can withdraw some lessons from historical events in the past about humanity and tolerance, which is
a
Suggestion
an
effective way to motivate them into a law-abiding citizen in the future. Despite the aforementioned argument,
Science
and
Technology
have
hold
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held
different responsibility in term of
technology
innovation and the nature of everything. Regarding the former, given that the development of
technology
, the important role of
science
and
technology
is emphasized, the job market requires more employees graduating from
science
university. It is substantial to concentrate on
science
and
technology
to meet the requirements of the career. The other beneficial aspect is that
science
and
technology
subjects at school are the basic steps for a higher understanding of the nature of how everything runs and provide soon-to-be scientists and inventors. In conclusion, both these subjects are extremely necessary at school.
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