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Some people say parents should limit the hours of watching TV and playing computer games of their children, but instead encourage them to read books.Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays people give their children the liberty to live their lives on their own terms. Parents do not wish to restrict their children, but children require some guidance from elders from
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 to
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. Children do not know their limitations and end up spending
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the majority
a majority
 of their
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 in watching TV and playing
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 games.
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 becomes a major setback in their education as well as physical well being. Parents should
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 inculcate the habit of reading in children from an early age. It not only gives them wide
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knowledge, but
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 helps them greatly in improving their vocabulary, imagination and is a good hobby for them to spend
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 effectively.Parents should
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 encourage kids to involve in outdoor activities as it would keep them fit and healthy. Playing
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 games
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have only had
 a negative impact.Many adolescents these days are actively involved in playing
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 games and are addicted to the virtual world of gaming.
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 is a major worry for parents as it affects the mental health of their children.
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, in recent times there came a deadly
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 which led to the suicide and killing of many young adults who played the
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. It was said to be the very rule of the
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, to do criminal or harmful tasks and
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 kill themselves. Many families were wretched because of
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 games as the youngsters had no choice but to complete the tasks once they started the
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.
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 was a huge issue worldwide and
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 led to the ban of
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 games in various countries. Watching television within a set limit is could be allowed as it
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 gives
certain level
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a certain level
 of exposure of what is happening around the world
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but definitely isn't a great boon to children. Ruskin Bond said "Books are one's best friend", they give children a gateway to imagine and dream. Reading books, not only are
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informative, but
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 has a lot of live scenarios which may at some point of
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 help in making decisions in life.
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, the conclusion is that parents should definitely put a hold on children from playing
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 games and watching television for long hours as it has only negative impacts.
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hand reading
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hand, reading
 books is a very good habit which does not harm the children in any way and only has pros to it.
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