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Some people think that teacher training courses can make anyone a teacher while others feel that an excellent teacher cannot be made by pursuing a course.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #teacher #courses #anyone #course
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In recent years, with the advancement in education
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there has been an increased need for teachers.While some individuals believe that people can
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
 in some seminars on how to lecture
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others think that a good tutor does not need to study how to become
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.In my opinion, I think that for someone to be proficient in educating others
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they have to be taught how to do so. On the
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 hand
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some people believe that education is needed on how to be a lecturer and I agree.
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if someone
enrolls
register formally as a participant or member
enrols
 in a teaching institute, the
person
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 can learn the basics of how to become a teacher and a good
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 at that.In Nigeria
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there are several teaching programs that train people on how to become teachers. These facilities and their courses are made compulsory for intending tutors.So it can be seen that training can make any
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 to become a lecturer.
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others believe that enrolling for a course cannot make a
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 to be an efficient
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 of knowledge.
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 is because they think that a
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 has to be interested in teaching as a whole before he can
be be
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
 able to impart knowledge in others.
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 interest and passion play a role when educating others
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especially children,
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 still needs to learn the basic skills of tutoring in
other
(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed
order
 to be good at it. To sum up
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while people have different ideas about teachers going for training
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in my opinion, I believe that they need to gain knowledge about how to be proficient and efficient in their career path.
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