You rent an apartment and recently a new neighbor has moved in who lives above you. They are making a lot of noise and this is disturbing you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Explain what the problem is Explain why it is disturbing you so much Tell your landlord what you would like him/her to do about it

Dear Sir,
This
is to bring to your notice that the new tenants who
has
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have

The singular verb has does not appear to agree with the plural subject the new tenants. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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occupied the upper floor
is
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are

The singular verb is does not appear to agree with the plural subject the new tenants who has occupied the upper floor. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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creating
hell
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a hell

The noun phrase hell seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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of disturbance with their
never ending
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never-ending

It appears that never ending is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).

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noise which is really not
accepted
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acceptable

The word accepted doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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. They scream
on
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at

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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each other with
abusing
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abusive

The word abusing doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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words.
Morever
Correct your spelling
Moreover

The word Morever is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

, the language they utter passes to us very transparently making us feel disgusting.
Also
, sounds of ragging heavy objects like
bed
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beds

It seems that bed may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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, chairs, sofa sets, etc creates
lot
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a lot

It appears that the phrase lot does not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.

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of commotion bringing
head aches
Correct your spelling
headaches

The word head aches seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.

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. In contrary to our multiple requests, we are asked to enter their house again. Request you to kindly take a serious decision on
this
and let us know at the earliest so that we can plan
further
. Hope to hear from you. Regards,
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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