You rent an apartment and recently a new neighbor has moved in who lives above you. They are making a lot of noise and this is disturbing you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Explain what the problem is Explain why it is disturbing you so much Tell your landlord what you would like him/her to do about it

Dear Sir,

This

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is to bring to your notice that the new tenants who

has

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occupied the upper floor

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are

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creating

hell

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a hell

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of disturbance with their

never ending

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noise which is really not

accepted

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. They scream

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each other with

abusing

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words.

Morever

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Moreover

, the language they utter passes to us very transparently making us feel disgusting.

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, sounds of ragging heavy objects like

bed

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, chairs, sofa sets, etc creates

lot

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a lot

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of commotion bringing

head aches

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. In contrary to our multiple requests, we are asked to enter their house again. Request you to kindly take a serious decision on

this

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and let us know at the earliest so that we can plan

further

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. Hope to hear from you. Regards,

Mrs. Sumira Vempati

May 1, 2019

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Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

118 words

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