Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

An employment practices have been changed radically since
last
25 to 30 years. Most of the employers want to be looped with their employees all the
time
in order to get rid of any uncertain situation. These working practices have its own positive aspects;
however it
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however, it
has some significant negative points too. Technology is changing rapidly and it is setting
lot
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lots
of pressure on Multinational companies to small scale organizations to meet market demands. In order to meet
demands
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demand
or
requirements employers
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requirements, employers
are trying to get maximum possible
work
from their staff. Nowadays, managers are used to call their junior staff at any
time
if any
work
related critical situation comes around.
This
kind of practices has some advantages
such
as; Critical situation can be tackled immediately, in certain
conditions
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condition
problems needs to resolve on the spot to avoid any delays or financial damages to
company
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the company
.
For example
, Construction industry.
However
,
on the other hand
employees are getting paid for their working hours only.
Majority
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The majority
A majority
of employees
do not wants
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do not want
to
work
for free or they may not want to spend their family
time
at
work
even its urgency.
For example
, If
employee
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an employee
the employee
is enjoying their family
time
or function and if they asked to do something office
work
, definitely they will not like to skip their personal life.
This
may result in employee’s low morale; they might feel to switch their current job or start to hate their company, they may not
work
as
efficient
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efficiently
as they supposed to
work
. In conclusion, contacting employees 24X7 have its own benefits as an organization.
However
, it has significant downsides that might cost a-lot to employer

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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