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Too much emphasis is placed on testing this days, the need to prepare for test and examination is a restriction on teachers and also exerts unnecessary pressure on young learners. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Examination
Suggestion
The examination
 is said to be the boss of students irrespective of age or
class
 and it is an integral part of
learning process
Suggestion
the learning process
. Excessive special attention
is given
Suggestion
has been given
 to testing recently, the necessity to prepare for it and
examination
Suggestion
examine
 mounted
unrequired
not returned in kind
unrequited
 distress on young knowledge
acquisitors
.
This
 essay will discuss in details why
testing students
Accept comma addition
testing, students
is
Suggestion
are
 essential. To start with, there are limitations on what tutors can do when it comes to preparation for examinations but to impact knowledge
on
Suggestion
of
 their students.
For instance
, they do lots of work
to
Suggestion
in
 preparing what to teach their students on
daily basis
Suggestion
a daily basis
, coming to the
class
 to transfer every information necessary for students to know.
Conversely
, it is evident that teacher's duties during testing time is to examine their students.
Moreover
, readiness for
academic evaluation start
Suggestion
the academic evaluation start
 from the
first
 day in
class
, it is an exclusive duty of each student to note and start preparing for examination as soon as possible as
this
 will measure their level of their understanding. Example of
this
 is,
student
Suggestion
students
a student
the student
 who studied what was taught in
class
 on
daily basis
Suggestion
a daily basis
 and read ahead of the
next
class
 might not experience
unrequired
not returned in kind
unrequited
 tension while preparing for
test
Suggestion
the test
tests
.
However
, anxiousness can not be ruled out in the face of examination. To conclude,
this
 essay discussed
prominence
Suggestion
the prominence
 given to testing in recent days and the
preparation which
Accept comma addition
preparation, which
 is limited to knowledge
acquisitors
 even in the face of not needed distress. I believe that young learners should be evaluated to be sure of their level of their competencies.
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