Counties such as China, India and Japan have unsustainable population growths. In fact many experts are of the opinion that the population ‘explosion’ which is now a very worrying concern, is the most serious threat to life on this planet. Give some suggestions to address this problem.

In the modern life, the Earth
are facing
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is facing
a host of serious problems
such
as overpopulation, climate change and losing biodiversity. In
this
essay we might find out some solutions to tackle
population
explosion. In many corners of the world, developing in the number of citizens is becoming much more unpredictable and it is bringing a various drawbacks to our planet. In many cases, government is
such
fundamental factor to deal with
this
problem, to be more clear government could come up with some laws to have a limitation in which a couple parent could have certain children.
For example
, China is the most
crowed
overfilled or compacted or concentrated
crowded
country with around 1.
3 billion resident
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The 3 billion residents
3 billion residents
, their political leaders ordered some restrict rules to their citizens which allow each family only have one child
instead
of unlimited gave birth like in the past. According to some statistics, China's
population
significantly fell and as some
prediction
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predict
the number will underneath 1 billion people.
Additionally
, not only
authorities
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the authorities
but
also
individuals should give hands to address
this
issue. As far as we are
concerning
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concerned
,
people'awareness
play
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plays
an integral role because of some reasons. Having said that the higher citizen's perceive,
the easier
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the easiest
way to decrease
population
explosion, owing to the fact that when people know exactly the dangerous threats of overpopulation including giant
neccesary
absolutely essential
necessary
unnecessary
demands for daily lives, lack of space.
Therefore
, we need to create many campaigns from media to schools, workplaces and so on to encourage people to control the growth of
population
. Having said that, human as a highly adaptable species we could thrive in many poor conditions;
however
, our planet has
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
limit we can not exploit natural resources like recently to serve the expanding of
population
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the population
. In conclusion, there are many methods to reduce the development in the number of people all around the world;
however
, we should immediately take
actions
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action
because many negative impacts of
this
problem
already affect
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have already affected
us.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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