The table illustrates the 6 languages which are the most popular in the world with the number of people use it.

overall
Suggestion
Overall
,
mandarin
the dialect of Chinese spoken in Beijing and adopted as the official language for all of China
Mandarin
chinese
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
is the biggest
language
in total users in the world. Meanwhile, immediately after it,
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
is 2nd most popular with great contribute from
number
Suggestion
a number
of speakers as an additional
language
. Hindi, Spanish, Arabic and Portuguese fall behind them. According to the table, 900
million
in the
number
of native speakers plus 190
million
speakers of an additional
language
lead mandarin
chinese
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
to the 1st rank in total
number
of speakers
with
Suggestion
to
1090
million
.
while
Suggestion
While
the figure of
first
language
in
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
is 339
million
,
however
, only
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
has the
number
of speakers as an additional
language
bigger than native speakers
with almost double in
Suggestion
with almost double
the quantity with 603
million
.
the
Suggestion
The
figure of
speakers
Suggestion
the speakers
in both
first
and additional
language
in
portuguese
a native or inhabitant of Portugal
Portuguese
is the lowest with 203
million
and 10
million
,
Accept space
,
respectively.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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