Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?

In
20th century
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the 20th century
,
Television
is
one
of the major entertainments for most of the people in the world.
This
essay agrees that many people prefer only to watch
television
in their free
time
, which makes them lazy and prevent them from socializing with others.
Inspite
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In spite
of many advanced technology available in
20th century
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the 20th century
for an entertainment, people still prefer to stick with watching
television
in
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at
their free
time
.
This
is because of several
number
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numbers
of
program
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programs
available in multiple channels.
Also
, climatic change is
also
one
of the main
reason
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reasons
for people prefer to stick with the
television
during their leisure period. In countries like, India, Srilanka, and middle east countries,
temperature
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the temperature
could reach
upto
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up to
50 degrees.
This
makes people not to go out and sit at home. Which, ultimately makes them to watch programs
in
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on
television
. People started to feel comfortable by sitting at their own place, having food and watching programs in
television
. After
one
point of
time
,
this
makes them very lazy to go out. Most of the people, get addicted to
this
as it is
more comfort
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more comfortable
to them. Some people, avoid going out with friends and families during the weekends in their free
time
.
This
makes them to miss their social life and project them as a loner. Some of the people, ends up in getting separated from their family because of the above said behaviours. In conclusion,
television
plays a major role in
one
's life.
Its
Suggestion
It's
adviced
having the benefit of careful prior consideration or counsel
advised
advice
to everyone, not to get more attached to it rather than spending quality
time
with friends and families. Spending quality
time
with people, gives you more positive energy and makes you to feel fresh.
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