The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the associated visitor satisfaction is outlined in the pie charts.
Overall
, the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum increased significantly throughout the surveyed period. Meanwhile, more tourists felt satisfied with their visiting experience after the museum was refurbished.
To be more specific, the visitor numbers increased about
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by about
third
in the two years, from 74,000 to 92,000. As for the satisfaction of these people, the proportion of visitors who felt very satisfied with their journey more than doubled after the reconstruction. Similarly
, the satisfied people also
rose its rate from 30% to 40%.
For those who were not pleased with the visiting experience, jointly, it accounted for a
half before the refurbishment, with 40% dissatisfied and 10% very dissatisfied respectively. Correct article usage
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However
, these data shrank dramatically in the next
year, as the percentage of dissatisfied people dropped by one-quarter, and the very dissatisfied tourists declined to a
half of its initial figure. Remove the article
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