Many people say that universities should only offer to young students with highest marks, others say they should accept people with all ages, even if they did not do well. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

These days, raising the question of whether universities should be
opend
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open
opened
to everyone, regardless of their
ages nor
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ages, nor
their academic performances, or it should remain a place for well-qualified students.
Although
only accepting for top higher-score students
is
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are
prominent, I believe that
university
-level education might be acceptable for people with all ages. There
are
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is
a host of reasons why universities want to filter out its students by academic performance.
Firstly
, to gain specialized knowledge, students have to possess the good general knowledge they desire to apply, which is assessed by passing the examinations with flying colours. Technical fields as an example, to program a software, IT-
ers
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ears
might be proficient in programming language theories and algorithm as well, which only well-qualified students could meet.
Secondly
, the academic barrier partly helps students reduce their time and money waste.
This
is because if they insist on applying to the universities whose courses are too
rigorious
rigidly accurate; allowing no deviation from a standard
rigorous
for them, leading to the fact that they feel disappointed or even be dropped out.
However
,
university
should be
opened
Suggestion
open
for all applicants regardless of their ages and their abilities.
This
is
Suggestion
was
due to lack of study opportunities in the past, which is
as a result
of wars or family background. In fact, every year, there are lots of adults taking the
university
entrance exams in Vietnam as they did not have
money
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the money
or time so as to go to the
university
when they were younger. What is more, the results of admission exams accurately evaluate one’s abilities that are determined by factors
such
as experience, communication. The proven clues
is
Suggestion
are
that Harvard
university
approve the
appliciants
a person who requests or seeks something such as assistance or employment or admission
applicants
applicant
as long as they expressed their determination and persuasion.
As a result
, students who graduate from
this
place, are almost
succeed
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succeeding
. In conclusion, I believe that universities accept the candidates without consideration of their academic performances is more
imporatant
of great significance or value
important
than choosing outstanding students.
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