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Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers. What are some problems associated with reliance on computer and what are some of the possible solutions

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Computer
 act as
important machine
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an important machine
 for students to do all the school related
work
, so most of the pupils depend on it.
However
 the principle problem is
students allowing
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students, allowing
 machine to do all the
work
 for them without thinking for themselves and a possible solution
is
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are
 to have stricter supervisions from
teacher
 and parents.
Firstly
,
this
 essay will discuss the problem that
computer
 is acting as a spoon feeding for students to complete all their school
work
 and the solution
of
Suggestion
to
this
 issue is supervision should have on them by their mentors
Firstly
, the major problem of
this
 issue is pupils take a help of
computer
 for completing all the school works like assignments and
project
. As the result of
this
plural of "this"
these
 students can’t think of their own for assignment and can’t improve their knowledge about the topic if they are getting all the information without taking any efforts for it. And
this
 will not help them to face
competitive world
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the competitive world
. University research shows in Times of Bombay that 60% students complete their assignments with
help
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the help
 of
computer
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the computer
a computer
computers
 rather than completing themselves.
However
 the solution for
this
 assertion is parents or
teacher
 should supervise their
work
 and encourage them to complete assignment on their own.
However
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However, this
this
 can help to improve their thinking ability and boost their
confident
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confidence
for
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in
 doing their
project
 independently. For instant working on
project
teacher
 should ask the their students to think and make at least rough
project
 and
then
 take the help of
computer
 if needed , so
this
 can help them to improve their ideas and knowledge about the topics In conclusion, dependence of student on
computer
 can be avoided by parents and
teacher
 by supervising on them properly and encourage them to complete the
work
 independently
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