Some people feel that teacher training courses can make anyone a teacher while other feels an excellent teacher cannot be made by perusing course. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Peoples are divided on the opinion of whether an individual should join
training course
Suggestion
a training course
to be a good
teacher
or not. Some argue that taking training
in classes can help
Suggestion
classes can help
them to learn new teaching methods and
also
learns to maintain friendly relation between
students whereas
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students, whereas
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
think teaching is inbuilt talent present in an individual’s, so course is not required.
This
essay agrees that learning upgrade teaching techniques can make them perfect
teacher
.
Firstly
, taking classes will help a person to gain new techniques of teaching and to create a good bond with students, to whom they are going to teach.
However learning
Accept comma addition
However, learning
the new skills and certificate of training course can help them to get a job in good institute. In many institute majority of jobs is given to the people who is having
appropriate training certificate
Suggestion
an appropriate training certificate
to showcase their skills.
However
, on
other hand some
Suggestion
the other hand, some
the other hand some
people has inbuilt skills of
explain
Suggestion
explaining
their view to someone as
this
talent can help them to be a good
teacher
. But they are lacking in
maintain
Suggestion
maintaining
the relation
with
Suggestion
to
student
Suggestion
the student
a student
.
Moreover these
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Moreover, these
skills will not help them to get
job
Suggestion
the job
a job
jobs
in any repudiated institute as they need the documents proof. Government in India had made a law that every person working as a
teacher
should have skills and
also
have appropriate qualification or training of
teaching
Suggestion
teachers
. In a nutshell, to be perfect
teacher
person should join classes as
this
will help them to learn new skills and to get a good job

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