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Some people feel that teacher training courses can make anyone a teacher while other feels an excellent teacher cannot be made by perusing course. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Peoples are divided on the opinion of whether an individual should join
training course
Suggestion
a training course
 to be a good
teacher
 or not. Some argue that taking training
in classes can help
Suggestion
classes can help
 them to learn new teaching methods and
also
 learns to maintain friendly relation between
students whereas
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students, whereas
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 think teaching is inbuilt talent present in an individual’s, so course is not required.
This
 essay agrees that learning upgrade teaching techniques can make them perfect
teacher
.
Firstly
, taking classes will help a person to gain new techniques of teaching and to create a good bond with students, to whom they are going to teach.
However learning
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However, learning
 the new skills and certificate of training course can help them to get a job in good institute. In many institute majority of jobs is given to the people who is having
appropriate training certificate
Suggestion
an appropriate training certificate
 to showcase their skills.
However
, on
other hand some
Suggestion
the other hand, some
the other hand some
 people has inbuilt skills of
explain
Suggestion
explaining
 their view to someone as
this
 talent can help them to be a good
teacher
. But they are lacking in
maintain
Suggestion
maintaining
 the relation
with
Suggestion
to
student
Suggestion
the student
a student
.
Moreover these
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Moreover, these
 skills will not help them to get
job
Suggestion
the job
a job
jobs
 in any repudiated institute as they need the documents proof. Government in India had made a law that every person working as a
teacher
 should have skills and
also
 have appropriate qualification or training of
teaching
Suggestion
teachers
. In a nutshell, to be perfect
teacher
 person should join classes as
this
 will help them to learn new skills and to get a good job
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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