Some believe that is is the responsibility of people to take care about the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

In recent years we have witnessed drastic changes in our climate. One of the major causes for
this
is because, the
environment
is being constantly destroyed and we have to ensure it is protected.Few people believe that
individual
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the individual
are
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is
responsible to protect the
nature whereas
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nature, whereas
other few people say it is
government responsibility
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a government responsibility
to safeguard it.
This
essay will discuss both the views, and in my
opinion it's
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opinion, it's
the
government
who has to protect the
nature
. On one hand, we individuals are responsible for destroying the
nature
. We cut
myriad
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a myriad
of trees for our personal needs
,
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,
and
this
leads to more pollution and climate change.To ensure the well being of the
nature
, people should plant more trees so that the pollution is reduced.
For example
, there are many NGO that
work
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works
together and ensure that sufficient trees are planted regularly. People can enrol in these activities and can plant trees so that our future generation will have a fresh and healthy
surrounding
the environmental condition
surroundings
to live. In fact, a study shows that if our
nature
is destroyed at
same rate
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the same rate
our future generation will live
in
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on
a planet without trees and will lead to extinction of mankind without oxygen.
On the other hand
,
government
need to ensure that
environment
are protected by not destroying our forests.
Government
must ensure a robust law is implemented to protect the
environment
and have a separate department to protect the
nature
and increase the size of
current population
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the current population
a current population
current populations
of trees.
For example
, the
karnataka
state in southern India; formerly Mysore
Karnataka
government
has ensured that the Bandipur forest is under their control and each year there is a significant increase in the population of the trees and
also
increase in number of wildlife is seen. To conclude,
government
and
citizens both
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citizens, both
have to ensure to protect the
nature
for future generations. But it is the
government
who has to implement strict laws to ensure no one destroys
nature
and
also
they have to protect the
environment
.
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