Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the higher

demand

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of famous consumer products

reflect

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reflects

the importance of advertising and not the actual requirements of the people.

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disagree

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disagrees

with the argument of effect of product promotion on the increasing sales of well-known consumer goods. In

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era, people are smart enough to protect their self against unreasonable spending under the influence of any advertisement.

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, people think logically before taking any buying decision.

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is due to the fact that advertisers many a time go overboard in their claim regarding their product’s features and losing the trust of consumers.

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, Oxyrich, a mineral water brand, claimed 300% more oxygen in water. We all know that

human body

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the human body

take

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takes

oxygen through breathing and higher amount of oxygen in water is irrelevant and useless.

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, consumers never buy a product without the need and based on some irrational logic.

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, advertising does push

sales but

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sales, but

there has to be a specific need in the market.

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, high sales are due to the ever increasing population in all the continents. So, it leads to the impression that marketing tactics are working to fool people and gain traction in the market. Any person with average intelligence can understand the proportional relationship between increasing

demand

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and rising population. As per recent study data shared by the Indian institute of management, the overall rise in consumer product’s

demand

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is 7% which

is proportionally correlated

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proportionally correlates

with the new birth rate.

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, making it clear that the actual consumption happens because of the

demand

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, not the marketing gimmicks. In my opinion, today’s buyer is very sharp and intelligent who will never fall in the trap of advertisements.

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, the increasing number of people drives the higher sales irrespective of product promotion campaigns.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumer behavior
perceived need
lifestyle aspirations
brand image
prestige
psychological techniques
scarcity
social proof
celebrity endorsements
technological advancements
product innovations
emerging consumer needs

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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that modern technology is having a negative impact on social relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to thei main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words