Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

Nowadays, people are travelling to the unknown parts of the planet like never before, especially places like the Antarctica or the Sahara Desert, that have extremely hostile climatic conditions. In
such
areas, the weather is tough and if something goes wrong, it is difficult to survive. Over the past few centuries, due to the rapid development of the modern-day technologies, humans have been able to reach remote corners of the planet with ease. Some of the benefits that the tourists might experience while visiting
such
isolated places are, they will be able to see the true and unaltered beauty of the nature. Visitors can learn, on how to fight for life in the hostile environments.
Finally
, they will be able see how the global warming is truly affecting the ecological balance on the planet and they in turn can
educate few
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educate a few
others about the destruction of nature that humanity is causing. There is one major disadvantage that the
adventurists
willing to undertake or seeking out new and daring enterprises
adventurous
might have to face,
that is
the personal safety. There are many
instances all
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instances, all
over the history, where the
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
have lost lives while surfing through the inhospitable locations like the Antarctica or the Sahara Desert and sometimes due to unpredictable weather conditions, the life of the rescuers too will be put
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
the danger.
For example
, in
middle
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the middle
of the 20th century, few adrenaline seekers travelled to the one of the coldest places on earth,
that is
Siberia. For the
first
few days, they were able to survive without much effort, as they moved in to
inner circle
Suggestion
the inner circle
an inner circle
, the weather turned violent and all of them turned
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
dead bodies in a single night. To conclude, whoever wants to go to
such
remote places must be ready to face the consequences, sometimes they can be good and if something goes wrong, it can turn deadly.
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